Poetry

We're finally starting to get in to the poetry segment in English class. Today we spent the period making poems out of snippits of other poems. The last assignment of the day was to take the line that was given to you and form your own poem around it. You could change the tense, and move the words around, but you had to incorporate it somehow.
The quote I chose to use was "Nights disappear like bruises, but nothing is healed."
Here's my kickass poem:

i've been sleepless for weeks now
something holds my eyes open
my soul is searching, seeking and
won't let me rest till i have found something.

the days fade into nights
and the nights disappear like bruises
only when a bruise is gone, there's no more pain,
and with me, nothing was healed.

Watch out now! You've just been ANGSTed! I rule!